Harveytherabbit: Excellent premise and execution overall with the exception of the overly exaggerated camera movement. It takes away from the scene rather than enhances it. I'd recommend and request a version where the camera allows the viewer to 'breathe' and take in what's happening. Let your animation speak for itself and choose good angles and compositon.

shingo: Nice and fun! 〜(￣▽￣〜)

Icekatana: Yes, please stop camera shaking. It is awful in any format.