italiansausage: could probably be trimmed down to a 3-4 sec loop

Dingofiz: @italiansausage: IMO the only thing that needs to be trimmed down is the scope. Honestly, we don't need to see the enire bed.

CyberSlueth166: Man, all you ppl do is bitch and complain, stop fuckin complaining and just enjoy the show ffs.

italiansausage: If we all jerked each other off about how good everything is without critique then nothing would ever get any better.

So quit your bitching, @CyberSlueth166

Hyperlink_Rises: The FOV is def the main issue though. Too little focus is given to any particular area of the shot, leaving the motion feeling stilted and floaty. Bringing the camera in, or even cutting to a portrait ratio might help frame the motions and give a bit more impact.

Then again, the sort of disconnected, apathetic expression she's giving might lend credit to the visuals veing a reflection of her feelings. She would rather be anywhere else, and so she appears extraordinarily distant from the viewer/fucker.